Score: 5

"Wow"

submission: The Fern Ascension

date: August 22, 2004

I don't really know if this is an improvement from starcraft battle chest. It's certainly confusing and pointless, which is always a good start. There are some funny parts in here, but on newgrounds mom and FF jokes are often shot down unless they're presented extremely well. Keep trying robot, hoping to see new stuff from you soon.

Score: 7

"Excellent"

submission: Lord of the Samurai

date: August 15, 2004

That was great for a first submission, a lot of flash artists have made tons of movies and still can't animate that well

Score: 8

"hahahahh yeah"

submission: QuAsi & am0zinG WiNG FaT

date: August 15, 2004

Easily the funniest thing I've seen all day. Congratulations.

Score: 10

"YAAAAAAY"

submission: [Loop] Jumpsuit

date: August 8, 2005

hahahah this just makes me want to dance around with a bunch of japanese girls like in sum japanese music video about being a japanese gangster. i dunno why japanese. but it just seems to make sense. this is delicious, its all about the rythym, good simple melody so u can just groove out to the beat, excellent job, well looped too, MAYBE if i had to say one thing, i would say in order to make it feel more like a loop, dont drop the beat right before it loops again, so it doesn't totally feel like it would otherwise stop, other than that yeah i dunno, even that is not a big deal, its still super awesome

Score: 8

"iits just the same thing"

submission: Nothing Smooth v.2

date: August 8, 2005

plus different drums, a few changed effexcts n shit, sum tweaking of levels and such here and there---maybe my only criticism would be not to submit something until it is donee,, or at least if you're going to do it like you did then at least change it enough so it is significantly different... not that i don tlike, its totally bitchin

Score: 9

"Cool...?"

submission: Conseptual Instrumental

date: July 8, 2005

But i think poetic raven made a good point... i mean , i certainly wouldnt call this techno, there's no 4 on the floor bass drum, but it's too "busy" for hip hop, with the swishy robot mechanical factor things happening being built in the background robots working sounds... hahah i dunno. Drum could be louder and punchier, and if you really want it to be hip hop, you need "DA PHAT BASS!!" don't be afraid to be excessive. but yeah, this is still really cool, hip hop, techno, whatever the fuck you want to call it, keep up the good shit man